Of the recognizable featured vloggers, I was drawn to Nika Harper, known for her League of Legends videos. Her first entry was about short story challenges, topics of discussion suggested and completed by participating viewers. One of the suggestions was "mosquito musicians" and that got the gears cranking.
I wanted to shirk the expected answers of tiny winged drummers and guitarists and a skin-piercing needle nose waving above a microphone as a mohawked mosquito sang some buzz-rock song. I borrowed a bit from Prey (by Crichton) and Akira, so I went from one cookie-cutter story to an amalgamation of two others, but hey, it was an interesting exercise and my blog's first work of pure fiction.
Enjoy, as disturbing as it may be!
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Mosquito Musician
A short story exercise
The vibrant hum in the air changed pitch as Pietr lifted one
palm up a few inches higher. Before me the air was a shifting sandstorm of mosquitoes all the bugs from eyesight concentrated above and ahead of us in a
dense sphere two meters in diameter. Individual mosquitoes swarmed amongst
themselves in acrobatic display of systemic chaos, but at many times large
numbers would drop unexpectedly, wings no longer flapping, for brief beats, and
the accompanying note change from this buzzing orchestra never failed to make
the hair on my arms raise in goose bumps.
Just how Pietr commanded his bloodsucking legion was beyond
my attempts to theorize. The closest I could consider is some sort of telekinetic
comic book power over the local air currents, corralling the tiny terrors in
buffered winds, confining them to our immediate line of sight. Or maybe he
exhibits some sort of control over the tiny minds and wings of these unwilling
musicians. He was from some snow-bound hell in northern Russia, where children
of the 70s grew up bending spoons and staring at goats.
The chorus reached a crescendo, and it became recognizable
as some work of Bach – who can remember all those names and movements and keys –
and Pietr conducted with his arms raised high, the swarm accommodating his
wishes all at once with a loud increase of buzzing, until he dropped his arms
suddenly, only catching them near the bottom of their fall. The swarm all
dropped in sudden silence a few inches, then exploded into action for the large
ending. The well-defined sphere dissolved immediately as 100 square yards’
worth of mosquitoes dispersed to and started swarming above us as normal mosquitoes do. They showed no sign of distress or discomfort from their ideal, except that they all seemed
to want to land on us at once to feed, but Pietr immediately slouched down to
near collapse, breathing heavy and wiping sweat that beaded his wide brow from
the exertion. However he does it, it takes a lot out of him.
The few of us watching all erupted into praise-filled exclamation. “That was incredible!” “How’d you do that?” “I don’t believe my
eyes!” Two of the six of us social outcasts had already started playing back the recording they
took on their cell phones, though the darkening eve doesn't allow the tiny
camera lens to capture clearly the astounding feat and the future YouTube
comments would call hoax and shenanigans.
Pietr dismissed himself in his
heavy Russian accent, and though the crowd encircled him like a chattering
peace-strike, we all stepped aside before he even lifted his eyes or his feet
or even indicated a direction. I felt the slightest urge in my left foot to
step back, and before I recognized that the command didn’t come from my polite
manners, I was opening a space for Pietr to walk through.
Pietr sat where he normally sat in 7th period
Social Sciences class, way in the back corner, surrounded by the sleepers, the
chewers with their soda can spittoons hidden from sight, and the other
malcontents who desired no attention from the instructor. Pietr shrank into
himself, sitting hunched over and arms folded within him, willing himself to be
as small and unobtrusive as possible. At 5 foot 2 inches and barely 100 pounds,
it would work, if his immediate neighbors gave him a moment’s respite from
their constant teasing and bullying.
This particular day Joey Nichols produced an empty .75 vodka
bottle and mimicked his father’s alcoholism, all while donning the worst
attempt at a Russian accent since Chekov and egging his friends to laugh on.
Pietr shrank further within himself and silently endured the unbidden
punishment for the minute it took for Mr. Connors to take notice and storm to
his rescue.
“THAT IS ENOUGH!” he yelled. “What is that?!” Swiping the bottle,
a disgusted look crossed Connors’ face. “Oh Christ, this is White Eagle! IT’S
NOT EVEN RUSSIAN, YOU FUCKING IDIOT! You’d think your deadbeat father would
have taught you better than that!”
Connors was a young guy who cared to not let a decade of
political correctness cover up his frat boy vernacular. It was effective;
rarely did he have to intervene twice in a class period, and usually only once
a week was all it took to silence his rowdiest of students.
I saw Pietr look up meekly at Mr. Connors in
appreciate, but as soon as our teacher turned back to the front of the
classroom, Pietr’s demeanor turn evil and his eyes fell on the back of Joey
Nichols’ head. Almost as if he felt it, Joey turned around with a silent sneer
and met the Russian’s gaze. He mouthed “After school” and stereotypically ran
his thumb across his throat. I could only roll my eyes at the cliché.
After school naturally meant after football practice, and it
was near 6:00 when I saw Joey Nichols and his posse of wanna-be thugs march
past my house. I was in the front yard greasing the chain on my bicycle when
they stopped at the fence gate and shouted at me.
“Do you know where that little bitch Pietr is hiding?! We never got a chance to give him his welcome to America!!” Maxwell Patrelli stood to the left, and Chris Johnson, standing at Joey’s right shoulder, pounded his fist in the most intimidating way that his goofy gorilla body could muster, his face strained red and squinted in an anger that threatened nothing but the massive pimples on his nose. Puberty can be so harsh sometimes, but never was there a more deserving asshole for a hemorrhoid.
“Do you know where that little bitch Pietr is hiding?! We never got a chance to give him his welcome to America!!” Maxwell Patrelli stood to the left, and Chris Johnson, standing at Joey’s right shoulder, pounded his fist in the most intimidating way that his goofy gorilla body could muster, his face strained red and squinted in an anger that threatened nothing but the massive pimples on his nose. Puberty can be so harsh sometimes, but never was there a more deserving asshole for a hemorrhoid.
“I don’t know where he is, you imbeciles! Why don’t you take
your little play date inside – oh, wait, I bet you don’t want to be home when
Daddy gets drunk!” My words stirred the hornet nest, and these buffoons nearly
vaulted over the fence to get at me, but I knew the safety of my father was
behind me. He exited the garage, grease-covered wrench in hand, polishing the
stainless steel. He coolly leaned against the garage door frame, a veritable
Casey Jones, 6 foot 4, amongst a small clan of Foot Soldiers. The site of him
halted the marauders’ advance and they stepped off the fence back to the
sidewalk. My dad said nothing, just watched them sneer at us and grumble as
they started along the street and around the corner, out of sight.
“You know, even though those kids are worth nothing right
now, it’s not all their fault, and alcoholism is no laughing matter.” my father
lectured me. “Did you see the small cut on that Joey kid’s right cheek? The
result of a back-hand slap from a drunken dad. I know, we've all seen the
bruises on his mother, too, but they’ll both deny it if anybody asks. It’s best
to take pity on kids like these. Protect yourself, for sure, and if it comes
down to them starting a fight, you finish it. But before then, show some mercy
and compassion. K, kid?”
I nod understandably.
“Now they are looking for that
Russian kid, right?” Nod. “Do you know where he is?” Nod. Dad hefts the wrench
up between us. “Do you know how to use this tool to put that tire back on your
bike?” Nod. “Do you know how to use it to end a fight?” Smile. Nod. “Dinner
will be in an hour. Clean up when you get home.”
Pietr was right where I expected him, and mounted on my
bike, I found him before Nichols and Johnson did. He was sitting on the ripped
and unsafe trampoline his host family had in the back yard, but he didn’t jump.
He just huddled there. There was no alley behind his house; the yard ran to the
edge of a swamp. It was getting darker earlier these fall days, and already I
was swatting bugs out of my face when I biked past the house and towards Pietr.
Pietr looked up with dull, sad eyes. He recognized a friend
and answered “Da” when I asked if I could join him. As I climbed onto the
treacherous trampoline, he noticed the wrench sticking out of the pocket of my
hooded sweatshirt, and inquired about it.
“Dissuasion technique” I answered and the intent did not
elude him, though his limited grasp of the English language means the word did.
He only nodded in return, and then both our attentions were drawn to the
street.
“There’s that little suka!”
Joey Nichols yelled, proud to show off his ability to Google Russian curses. “Oh,
and he’s with that nerd Emmerson! Let’s get them, boys! Daddy isn’t here to save
you now!”
I start to get up from my seated position on the trampoline
but a hand reached out and held me back. The gang of third-line football
rejects started running their fat bulk at us through the yard, between the
houses. I glance back at Pietr, imploring why he wouldn’t want my help or the help
of a couple of pounds of stainless steel, but I saw the answer in his eyes. The
diminutive Russian boy glared ahead at his assailants, and his eyes turned a deep, dark crimson.
My jaw dropped open and my hand released the wrench I was
holding when I felt the springy tension of the trampoline lessen, as if one of
the two bodies previously sitting on it was lifted.
Pietr, still cross-legged, floated above the trampoline and
hovered forwards.
Head down, black-blood eyes piercing forward, Pietr unfolded
his legs as they crossed over the boundary of the trampoline and set his feet
on the ground. The sparse blades of grass trembled as small balls of dirt
rolled away from Pietr. The very air around him surged with energy.
The advancing army of future drop-outs stopped dead in their
tracks. It took a moment before their brains processed what they saw, and then
their feeble brains handled it the only way they could. Silently, without a
look or a word, all four boys’ minds erased what they saw as inconceivable, and
in synchronous movement they all started forward to press their attack.
Pietr stood between them and me, almost glowing in the
darkening even, hair and shirt rustling in a breeze on an otherwise still
night. He raised his arms to the advancing horde and immediately a thrumming
seized the air and overtook us from behind. Above my head I saw a shadowy mass
flow like a ribbon through the air and with a downward thrust of Pietr’s hands,
descend upon the four would-be attackers. A thick fog of mosquitoes enveloped
the four boys, covering them from head to toe, blotting them out of sight until
they were four humanoid splotches of black against a dusky backdrop.
Immediately the screams rose from all four boys to join the cacophony of
horrible buzzing. This was no symphony. This was a slaughter.
The boys scratched and clawed at their faces, their eyes,
choked on bugs that poured into their open mouths and down their throats and
into and out of their nostrils. What skin that briefly appeared visible among
the black cloud was spotted and bleeding. Gasping breaths turned ever more
ragged and desperate.
“Pietr, that’s enough!” I shouted. I clambered off the
trampoline and stood yelling at this, this… things’ back. “You’re killing them!
That’s enough!” He turned his head on me and silently held my gaze: mine
imploring and pitiful, his sinister and dreadful. He turned back to his
torturous composition and raised his arms. The four shrouded figures began to
rise, and the mosquitoes' buzz reached a crescendo. Arms and legs dangled
lifelessly from the masses, inches above the ground, the victims giving signs
of life more infrequently now. Pietr wasn't going to stop. Pietr was going to
kill them.
I wrapped my hand around the wrench and held it high. I was
behind Pieter, slightly, feeling the crackling energy emitting from his form,
and he didn't see me swing. I connected with skull just behind his temple and
above his ears. He and the boys toppled to the ground like string-cut marionettes.
Immediately, the bulk of the swarm lifted off the boys’
bodies, nearly all of them bloated with blood. What was left under that blanket
of death was a grotesque sight. No square millimeter of exposed skin was
unmarred. Eyes puffed and throats coughed in futility for air, only to expel
more mosquitoes into the atmosphere. Chris Johnson didn't breathe at all.
I could only stand and stare, mouth agape, as the multitude
of deadly insect assassins flew back into the swamps behind me. I have no grasp
of time passing, just standing there, breathing heavily in shock and exertion,
with Pietr crumpled at my feet and the four bullies clinging to what was left
of their life just 6 feet away from me.
It only occurred to me that it
was nearly pitch black outside when the flashing lights of the emergency
vehicles pulled up. How the ambulances omnisciently knew to appear, I don’t
know, but suddenly I’m enveloped by a blanket and rushed to the street out
front.
Pietr never appeared in school again. The house with the
swampy back yard and the rusted, ripped trampoline was vacated before sun’s
light. Chris Johnson had died, but the only thing the news reported was a
tragic bee allergy. None of the other boys returned to class until after
Christmas, and none of them spoke a single word about their departed comrade,
or the missing Russian boy. None of them made so much as eye contact with me,
and never a word was spoken about the mosquito musician or his vampire symphony
again.
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